Music of Love
Surfing the waves of a captured heart.
Beat, beat, hear it thrum like a drum.
It weaves and dodges strange tunes.
It waits for a whistle.
A journey to you.
Feel excitement,
pain and joy.
Love of,
music.
Copyright Corbie Sinclair 2011
My One Shot Wednesday poem. I’ve got music on the brain as I wrote this Nonet. Please visit the other talented poets at http://www.onestoppoetry.com starting at 5pm EST time.
Ah, the music of love is so heart breaking and beautiful..
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great poem… Music has the power to capture your feelings perfectly, and touch you in ways unimaginable. nice work 🙂
This why I make music. Join my movement 🙂
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love how you reduce the length of the lines until only music is left…love it when only music is left…love your poem
nice, you pair it down to what it is the wave, the beat the rhythm it moves us moves out hearts moves our souls…i love music….
Like the idea of surfing the wave of a heart
Love to listen to music for the same reason. Thanks for expressing it inn poetry.
what a great word ‘thrum’ ‘thrum ;like a drum’ just rolls off the tongue can’t stop saying it ~ like a humming ~ this is genuis Corbie ~ Lib ~ @Libithinha
Nice play of words ~ specially this – Surfing the waves of a captured heart.
“Surfing the waves of a captured heart.”…captured my heart right there…beautiful!
Yes music of this sort can really capture the heart, great write.
And that capturted hearts sings in its captivity. Lovely poem, Corbie.
The heart dances to her own rhythm C but this nonet is beautiful, gorgeous!
Nicely written !
Music in life, Its pulse is undeniable, captured beautifully here ~ Rose